Send your army away and stand with the rockers who you’ve completely pissed off. This does not sound like a stragetically sound plan.
But yay Ben!
I intended to have Primrose speaking to Kyri and company. She’s telling them to go but Colindra stays. I can see how it can be interpreted that Primrose is talking to Ben and telling him to leave with the army. Rats.
Oh well. Sometime it’s a hit. Other times it’s a ground out. 🙁 My bad. But it will become clearer in the next few pages.
EDIT: Fixed it with added dialogue. 🙂
There we go! That makes much more sense and is far more Primrose! 🙂
I have a plan, we put a fake nose and hat on primrose, call her a witch and burn her!
Witches can be sexy, too. 😉
And who’s to say a fake nose and pointed hat aren’t sexy. Not me. 😉
Just mentioning something, it’s not that important. I think the dots after ‘Along with Colindra, the dog, and all of their stones’ are actually commas. Not really important… Oh well, I’ve already said it.
Oh yeah. I should really wear my glasses when I work. 🙂 I’ll fix it when I get a chance.
This one is still present as well. Yay iPod’s Retina display. I really do need to get better glasses. (It doesn’t help that my main computer monitor is 1440p, about 3-4x the width of most websites.)
End of Line
Thanks again for reminding me. It’s still on my list. 🙂
“All of their stones…” Does the “their” refer to Cole & the dog or to the whole group of rockers?
Cole and the dog. Primrose already has their stones in hand (Ben has them).
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