Endstone

Endstone is a work in progress, and sometimes I need to go back and make adjustments to make the story clearer (hopefully ).

I have a suspicion that Kyri’s motivation is not entirely clear, so I reworked page 19 of Issue 1 to drive the point a little more.  Basically, she won’t trust Jon because he terrorized the world (and Kyri and Cole) when he rocked the Banestone and was known as Time Killer.  She wants to save her daughter but doesn’t know what kind of person she’s grown up to be.  And lastly, Kyri’s outlook is about having faith.  She doesn’t understand life’s mysteries but has faith that a higher power guides us, and that things happen for a reason and will work out for the better (the opposite of what I mostly believe – LOL).

As the story progresses these things will be touched on more.

This page has been up for about a week so if you’ve recently read the Endstone archives you may have seen it.  If not, here it is:

Issue1 Page 19

I added a bio for Herrik the Snake in the cast section.  You can also read it here:

Herrik

Aliases: The Snake, Herrik the Great Race: Human Height: 5′10″ Weight: 185 lbs. Hair: Light Brown Eyes: Blue

Herrik is perhaps the greatest hand to hand fighter in all of North America. And he knows it.

Trained as a fighting-priest at the Temple of the God Alvik in Memphis, Herrik has mastered many forms of martial arts. However, for all his martial prowess, Herrik lacks the ability to rock the over-stones. Because only monks with innate stoner abilities can obtain the highest levels in Alvik’s clergy, Herrik became bitter and left the order.

During the ensuing years Herrik has lived by both his fists and his wit, yet he still harbors bitterness towards stoners. This is the main reason he has joined forces with Kyri Thunderhead and her power disrupting Endstone.

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