Cool. I’m glad it worked for you. 🙂 One of the most difficult things in writing is coming up with plans for the characters that the audience doesn’t see coming. 🙂
Well done. I definitely didn’t see that coming. He’s obviously going straight for the banestone, though it remains to be seen whether he can grab it in time.
I believe i definitivly can grab it in time. To counter the Quickstone, one has to except it first. But here, Cole is taken by surprise, having never seen her father using it.
What truely remains to be seen is wethere Jon can now resist Dr Simon’s telepathic influence.
Whoops. 😉
Yep. She fell for the old “‘Bet you can’t do that” trick.
Somehow I just can’t keep me from thinking about Jon pulling an Antoine Dodson:
“You’re so duuumb!
You’re really duuuumb!
For real!”
🙂
Now that was a smart plan. Making delibaratly a mistake during his multirocking demonstration, so she’d do it too when mimicing him.
Cool. I’m glad it worked for you. 🙂 One of the most difficult things in writing is coming up with plans for the characters that the audience doesn’t see coming. 🙂
Well done. I definitely didn’t see that coming. He’s obviously going straight for the banestone, though it remains to be seen whether he can grab it in time.
I believe i definitivly can grab it in time. To counter the Quickstone, one has to except it first. But here, Cole is taken by surprise, having never seen her father using it.
What truely remains to be seen is wethere Jon can now resist Dr Simon’s telepathic influence.
The only documented case of “Hey y’all, watch this!” actually working out. So far, anyway…