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4.07

Jul19
by Tony on July 19, 2010 at 12:01 am
Chapter: Issue 4
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  1. Fywillan
    Fywillan
    July 19, 2010, 2:51 am | # | Reply

    Hmmm… This flashback seems a little bit too long. I mean she IS running for her life. I guess this is the point where she would be tripping, but that would be an awfully short story. I hope to see Vandrick(?) the Grim in “real life” (I mean not just in flashbacks). He seems like a fun guy.

    So: SNAP OUT OF IT KYRI! MIND WHERE YOU STEP!

    woah, long post!

    • Tony
      Tony
      July 19, 2010, 8:18 am | # | Reply

      Kyri’s going to snap something before this scene is over that’s for sure. 😉

      This flashback was only one page when I first wrote it. But I was showing the roughs to a friend of mine and his main criticism was that he didn’t know who the characters were yet. I was going too fast! So I’m stretching scenes a little… but maybe it’s not working. With this scene I added just an extra page (last Thursday’s post and today’s post) to show why Kyri’s father was a big part of her life. It’s supposed to be a set-up to add emotional impact for what comes next.

      But then again, that’s the problem with the webcomic format: what would take 30 seconds to read in print could take weeks to present in a twice weekly web format. I’m still working on finding a balance. 🙂

      And thanks Fywillan. I really value your honest feedback. 🙂

      • Matanui3
        Matanui3
        December 16, 2013, 3:04 pm | # | Reply

        Don’t feel too bad. Entire weekly episodes of tv shows, or chapters of some webcomics are mostly flashback, with just a small amount of decisive action happening afterwards.

        • Tony
          Tony
          December 16, 2013, 6:57 pm | # | Reply

          Thanks for the feedback, Matanui3. 🙂

  2. Andaren
    Andaren
    July 19, 2010, 3:58 am | # | Reply

    Her brother looks a little jealous 🙂

    • Tony
      Tony
      July 19, 2010, 8:20 am | # | Reply

      Yes! He should be the Rainstone, not his younger sister. There is a whole ‘nother story there to be told, but I had to cut it because this scene was already running a bit long. Maybe later.

  3. hrimhari
    hrimhari
    July 19, 2010, 10:15 am | # | Reply

    Congrats on your comic, Tony. You’ve got a great universe there and an interesting story to be told. I’m glad to see it gradually catching up on the TWC.

    Your idea of putting a new preview every day is a great motivator.

    Be sure that Endstone will have a place in my shelf, next to LFG and the Noob as soon as I finish to put my new home in order and restart collecting.

    Cheers,
    hri

    • Tony
      Tony
      July 19, 2010, 6:54 pm | # | Reply

      Thanks alot, hrimhari. 🙂 I appreciate the encouraging words. Also, lately I was wondering if the TWC incentives are too much of a spoiler, and maybe I should stop. But I’ll keep it up. And I hope you are enjoying your new home. 🙂

  4. BA
    BA
    July 19, 2010, 2:16 pm | # | Reply

    AT…still loving the art and story line. I also enjoy the flashbacks as I know something is coming…something is going to happen. I just want it all NOW. So, I’m suggesting that you do a daily posting for the remainder of the summer (with all your free time, you know). BA

    • Tony
      Tony
      July 19, 2010, 6:58 pm | # | Reply

      Howdy Brent. How’s life at the grind treating you? As for updates, I’m doing two and half sometimes three full pages a week, but I’m building a bank in case I break more bones this coming year. The odds are not with me….

  5. sdstarr
    sdstarr
    July 19, 2010, 11:56 pm | # | Reply

    Hey, what’s with the REAL deer skull in the foreground of the last panel? Love the comic, keep confounding my expectations.

    • Tony
      Tony
      July 20, 2010, 12:10 pm | # | Reply

      The deer skull is the symbol of the goddess Vale. Same as the tattoo on Kyri’s back. And thanks for stopping by sdstarr. 🙂

  6. BA
    BA
    July 20, 2010, 4:57 pm | # | Reply

    The daily grind is the same as usual. Keep up the awesome work…maybe someday this can be your “real” job!!

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