Oooh, nice art. It does give a peaceful, sacred vibe. By the way, I think I’ve forgotten the name of the Deer God(dess?). Anybody remember what is it?
Wait.
Pablo and Colindra are alone in a secluded place and nobody knows they’re there. So… when is the ambush going to happen?
(Years of D&D have ruined my capacity for being non-paranoid)
She’s a teenager, not a doll. She may fancy fashion, but she also has her emotionly strong side, and this place is connected to that.
She could have aimed at St Louis as well, but too risky i think.
That’s a great observation, Leon. I originally had a line in there about how Cole felt this place was the most beautiful place she had ever visited. For some reason or another it was dropped in later drafts.
I got the uncomfortable laugh part, that did come through. It was only the jaw that I was uncertain. It worked either way, but it is better with the jaw drop.
Oooh, nice art. It does give a peaceful, sacred vibe. By the way, I think I’ve forgotten the name of the Deer God(dess?). Anybody remember what is it?
Wait.
Pablo and Colindra are alone in a secluded place and nobody knows they’re there. So… when is the ambush going to happen?
(Years of D&D have ruined my capacity for being non-paranoid)
Glad you like the art.
I’ve been experimenting with a new brush set in Clip Studio Paint (my art application) and I’m excited about the results.
I agree, you can really feel the fairy forest style
@Darth Killer: Thank you.
@Silly Name: Oh, and the deer goddess is “Vale.”
Who is Vala? I don’t remember…
Good question. “Vala” means “Mom” in Deerish. So that would refer to Kyri.
Interesting that she chose this place, and not a beauty parlor.
She’s a teenager, not a doll. She may fancy fashion, but she also has her emotionly strong side, and this place is connected to that.

She could have aimed at St Louis as well, but too risky i think.
That’s a great observation, Leon.
I originally had a line in there about how Cole felt this place was the most beautiful place she had ever visited. For some reason or another it was dropped in later drafts.
I can’t decide whether Grandpa’s reaction is a jaw drop, or just his usual jaw position? I could see it as something that would cause his jaw to drop.
It’s a jaw drop of surprise.
And Cole is supposed to be having an uncomfortable laugh. I don’t know if that came across either.
I got the uncomfortable laugh part, that did come through. It was only the jaw that I was uncertain. It worked either way, but it is better with the jaw drop.