I´m eager to read his intentions to save them.
The daughter of course should now flee the scene if she´s clever – better defeat them sperated than get slain by them all together.
The father himself can now claim a favour, we´ll see what kind of service.
A little odd is the flash of the explosion – maybe if the light would shine through the clothes more would make it more believable. It seems you made it i.e. at the pants, but little too less criss-crossed. And the clothes are not blown into direction.
Well, just my impression 😉
Dragonson – Thanks! I appreciate making that list. 🙂
Faber Draconis – Thanks for stopping by. Jon has a plan and agenda that will slowly be resolved over the next few issues. As for the art, I agree. The panel gave me all sorts of problems and I’ll try to learn from your suggestions. 🙂
Lunaroki – LOL. That pretty much sums it up, more or less. 😉
Elee – Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate the feedback. 🙂
~Al – You could be right. It’s not for me to say. But I’m glad the characters are getting a reaction from you. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. 🙂
Nice!
That’s possibly one of the greatest cliffhanger-cliffhangers i’ve seen so far!
Top 5 atleast! 😀
Great job!
I´m eager to read his intentions to save them.
The daughter of course should now flee the scene if she´s clever – better defeat them sperated than get slain by them all together.
The father himself can now claim a favour, we´ll see what kind of service.
A little odd is the flash of the explosion – maybe if the light would shine through the clothes more would make it more believable. It seems you made it i.e. at the pants, but little too less criss-crossed. And the clothes are not blown into direction.
Well, just my impression 😉
“Why are you being such a meany-head daddy? Why are you stopping me from killing mommy and her bad friend who want to take away my pretty jewelry?”
Dragonson – Thanks! I appreciate making that list. 🙂
Faber Draconis – Thanks for stopping by. Jon has a plan and agenda that will slowly be resolved over the next few issues. As for the art, I agree. The panel gave me all sorts of problems and I’ll try to learn from your suggestions. 🙂
Lunaroki – LOL. That pretty much sums it up, more or less. 😉
This is sooo WIN!
I’m definitely enjoying the old school feel here. And the word play makes it so much more brilliant. :D. I look forward to more.
If he let her die, the world were simply rid of an attention-deficit who can’t sit still for 5 minutes to hear a discourse on the Truth.
Elee – Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate the feedback. 🙂
~Al – You could be right. It’s not for me to say. But I’m glad the characters are getting a reaction from you. Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. 🙂