Great sense of motion in that last panel, compared to the silence and desolation of the first. I like it. I’m always amused, however, by the fact that only women, apparently, like to fight while half-naked while men are more fully clothed … 🙂
Thanks for checking out Endstone, Katy. As for Kyri’s clothing, on the one hand, a wanted her to look as wild and as “native” as I could and that means less clothes. On the other hand, I have to plead guilty. I am a fan of Savage Sword of Conan and stories of that ilk and that’s what I’m going for here. And yes, the women tend to be under-clothed in that genre…. 😉
I understand there was a pirate (I don’t remember her name) who used to dress as a man but then would flash her breasts at her more dangerous enemies at some crucial point during especially tough one-to-one fights so that they would be distracted for just a second and thus could be more easily disposed of.
I imagine having to fight a woman dressed like Kyri it would be pretty hard to concentrate, too.
Great sense of motion in that last panel, compared to the silence and desolation of the first. I like it. I’m always amused, however, by the fact that only women, apparently, like to fight while half-naked while men are more fully clothed … 🙂
Thanks for checking out Endstone, Katy. As for Kyri’s clothing, on the one hand, a wanted her to look as wild and as “native” as I could and that means less clothes. On the other hand, I have to plead guilty. I am a fan of Savage Sword of Conan and stories of that ilk and that’s what I’m going for here. And yes, the women tend to be under-clothed in that genre…. 😉
I understand there was a pirate (I don’t remember her name) who used to dress as a man but then would flash her breasts at her more dangerous enemies at some crucial point during especially tough one-to-one fights so that they would be distracted for just a second and thus could be more easily disposed of.
I imagine having to fight a woman dressed like Kyri it would be pretty hard to concentrate, too.
In the ’60s there was a book/comic strip series called Modesty Blaise where the heroine would flash her opponents.
Are you going to add in current day slang and phrases or maybe make up some of your own slang for the comic?
Reminds me of Bloodstone, the book.
New reader here. Think I’ll check this out. BTW, “alot” isn’t a word. Hope you’re using “a lot” by the time I finish reading the first chapter.