Comments on: Issue 1 Page 11 http://endstone.net/2009/04/10/issue-1-page-11/ Incredible Adventures in an Impossible Land Thu, 03 May 2012 15:30:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: SamB http://endstone.net/2009/04/10/issue-1-page-11/comment-page-1/#comment-961 SamB Tue, 31 Aug 2010 03:56:01 +0000 http://endstone.net/?p=231#comment-961 Yeah, those little "meanwhile, in fooland" boxes really help :-). Yeah, those little “meanwhile, in fooland” boxes really help :-) .

]]> By: Tony http://endstone.net/2009/04/10/issue-1-page-11/comment-page-1/#comment-234 Tony Thu, 06 May 2010 05:06:55 +0000 http://endstone.net/?p=231#comment-234 Thanks. And I hear you about the scene changes. I probably need to add some narration boxes. I'll put it on my list of things to fix. :) Thanks. And I hear you about the scene changes. I probably need to add some narration boxes. I’ll put it on my list of things to fix. :)

]]> By: Katy http://endstone.net/2009/04/10/issue-1-page-11/comment-page-1/#comment-227 Katy Wed, 05 May 2010 15:03:48 +0000 http://endstone.net/?p=231#comment-227 The one problem I have so far is your tendency to switch scenes and locations abruptly and, for instance here, with no explanation as to where we are, why we're in a new scene or what's happening. That said - that is a freakin' COOL lizard thing ... The one problem I have so far is your tendency to switch scenes and locations abruptly and, for instance here, with no explanation as to where we are, why we’re in a new scene or what’s happening.

That said – that is a freakin’ COOL lizard thing …

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